Saturday, January 22, 2011

Are these paragraphs arranged randomly?

Miami Beach firm touts safe way to pay online - Small Business -

Many news articles are poorly organized, but this is horrendous. Please give me one paragraph near the beginning that explains how the service works. Might you want to give use the firms web site so we could sign up if interested, as individuals or businesses? Maybe explain why it is different than Paypal or MoneyBookers and discuss how they will compete? This author should be ashamed and the editor should be fired.

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